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1000 Paper CranesI.1000 Paper Cranes
We whispered prayers into the corridors while I spoke into your ribcage, telling lies to our skeletons to help you understand.
you said they loved watching me wax poetic while I dripped candlelight into your hands.
we watched the dust motes cover our skin while I taught you how to fly. (you were always too afraid to fall and too afraid to land).
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It wasn't lovesongs we sang; it was half-forgotten hymns.
we never wanted to believe but you said ghosts exist without compassion, and with


Meyer's Writing SucksFor reasons beyond me, there are some people who think that the Twilight series are well written books. I don't think that there's anything wrong with enjoying badly written books, just as long as you realise that they are badly written books. Fans are using the excuse that it was her first book, and it was written just for fun or for herself. Yes, most books are, but is that an excuse to publish a book written entirely in purple prose with repetition, poor grammar, and thesaurus abuse? These books have clearly had little to no editing. Theyre like a very early first draft that I know Id be ashamed to let anyone see. Look at the wMeyer's Writing Sucks
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(\_/) This is Bunny.
(O.o) Help him on his way to
(>< ) world domination
Every Jesus has his way.
Cheers,
Stasha
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Everything will be just fine. [Welcome to my planet Hell.]
[And yes. I'm a stupid girl.
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